Moiraine vs. Kelsier Cagematch

[Deadsy 19]

If this is how he writes Moiraine, I might not be able to read the last book. He posted on twitter that he wrote it.

 

http://sf-fantasy.su...us-kelsier.html

Edited March 26, 2012 by Deadsy

[Olivia 26]

The only redeeming quality about that piece is that Moiraine is the clear leader in the poll.

[Marie 73]

Is it really that bad? I'm still in ticked off mode over Mass Effect and don't know if I can handle reading badly written Moiraine. God, I sound like such a nerd.

[Deadsy 19]

I should point out that he wrote it and sent it in the same day so he might've spent an hour writing it. But how could you ever make Moiraine say these things or say an incomplete sentence? *sniff*:

 

"Oh, please,” Moiraine said.

 

 

Moiraine shrugged. “Why should I care?”

 

 

"Doesn’t count."

[Marie 73]

I should point out that he wrote it and sent it in the same day so he might've spent an hour writing it. But how could you ever make Moiraine say these things or say an incomplete sentence? *sniff*:

 

"Oh, please,” Moiraine said.

 

 

Moiraine shrugged. “Why should I care?”

 

 

"Doesn’t count."

That is....

 

[Olivia 26]

Our Lady has made it to the final round of these silly cagematches. AND she is still the clear leader is the poll so far.

 

http://sf-fantasy.su...ylar-stern.html

 

I have no idea who the guy she's fighting is, but if he tries to go up against Moiraine....

 

 

[Ekho 51]

Kelsier's nothing impressive in my opinion, Mo could take him in a flash

[Sam 19]

Mo could take anyone in a flash...except maybe Nynaeve