I actually wrote something!

[Sivart Reborn 7]

I did!

 

Don't think it's good, but it's the best I've ever done. No rhyme intended at any point.

 

 

All things come to a close

The life One's been intent on dies

With the passage of time your intentions grew

Until you I no longer knew

Your assumptions outragous

Your claimed feelings impossible

All the time you've spent plotting

Just wishing for that kiss

All the time you spent watching

And through that you missed

Your only chance

I might have loved you

I might have cared

But my heart and soul are gone

Taken away

By the new girl

Though you've been my friend for years

And her only one

She is still my favorite, She is still the One.

 

Travis

[Cerendrallion 32]

I liked it!

 

I might have loved you

I might have cared

 

I especially liked that bit.

[Ishmael Moridin 0]

I like it !!

[Sivart Reborn 7]

The other one is not as good, and maybe even more sappy... but I like it since I wrote it on a friend of mine. Kinda a gift from me to her after we worked it all out. She wouldn't take anything else anyhow... So I wrote about her.

 

What a trick

You lil' doll

How could I eva go on without ya

Cold and cruel as you are

Cussin' me out

You even broke my arm

Or almost did

You yelled and screamed and yanked my hair

And after it all

You cried

Fell into my sore arms

And just wept

Sayin' I don't deserve that

Hittin' yourself for bein' who you are

Sayin' I'm better off without you

You try to walk away

You pretend not to know me

You know you'll hit me again

You know you'll yell

You say you love me to death

But your temper I should do without

But I won't let you go

'Cause girl

I love you

You ain't leavin', I don't care

'Cause girl I love you

 

I know it's sappy and kinda dumb... it's the 3rd poem I've written free style. She liked it and that was what counts for this one.

(first post was the first actually)

[jan 14]

Nice

 

Are they intended to be songs or just poems?

[Sivart Reborn 7]

I suppose you could sing them... I just wrote them to express feelings. Now that I look again, yeah I guess. Course, I'm musically handicapped... so... lol

[jan 14]

Fenix has a guitar... *prods Fenix*

[Ishmael Moridin 0]

Not at all bad,.. and I do a little bit of singing,...