Under the Kesiera Pts. 2, 3 & 4

[Kaitlin 22]

The second part is darn long and took me forever to do. It may be edited/redone again at a later date without effecting the plot of the story.

 

Part Two

 

 

[Kaitlin 22]

And Part Three

 

It was like being squeezed through a funnel with a bright light at the other end, and then flattened and chopped to infinitesimal pieces. They remained like that for a timeless second before being hastily thrown back together again. Going back through to the other side took them past a prism of colors, a whirling schism of shapes and sounds. It was hard to tell if their legs gave out or if they were thrown to the ground below them when they arrived.

 

Long colorful silk streamers lay heaped on the ground around them, and the sounds and smells of a festival followed along. The chorus of women singing stopped moments after Thom lifted his head.

 

This was surely not the uninhabited lands outside the Tower of Ghenji, nor any other place he

[Kaitlin 22]

And finally Part Four.

 

Moiraine looked down at the woman as if she

[jan 14]

Cool! Even though I just ran my eyes over them very quickly... will read in detail later...

[Marie 73]

*plops down to read*

[Cerendrallion 32]

*plops down beside*

[Marie 73]

Whee I finished!

 

When's Part Five?

[Whitty 29]

Hmm. Most interesting. Definately not what I would have expected. I'm very curious to see where this goes. Write more!!

[Kaitlin 22]

Yay! You guys are good, for reading such a long thing. *passes out cookies*

 

Part Five has not been written yet, except in rough draft. The more action-y parts seem to take me longer. Wow. I dunno if I should have gotten into doing an epic. *is not a writer at all* Next one will just be about another big bed, with Caddy's looovaahs instead of Momo's.

[Fenix 0]

Times were certainly interesting.

 

Definetly. It's awesome, keep up the good work.