Under the Kesiera

[Kaitlin 22]

This part one of what was posted on fanfiction.net. I'm still in the process of writing the second bit. It's all angsty and whatnot.

 

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It was almost like she was floating in a bath, with only her mouth and nose above the surface. But there were no currents of water to swirl against her skin. No warm candlelight glowed comfortingly from behind a screen. In fact there was nothing to be seen at all. It was like the memory of darkness that had ended all of her nightmares leading up to this day. Though, there was no sense of time anymore. Perhaps it was weeks she

[jan 14]

8) You've not got a secret line to RJ, have you?!

 

Impressive. And interesting. Any way I can influence you not to pair her with Thom ?

[Ishmael Moridin 0]

Good one Kaitlin.

 

I would have liked little more details of how exactly they got around to rescuing her though.

[Eldaya 0]

I like it.It`s very good.

 

But really...Moiraine with...Thom!?

[Kaitlin 22]

I didn't want to write it the standard way, with the rescue explained all the way through. Too much exposition all at once has always bored me, though, so I thought I'd put some details in here and there in the next part.

 

Also, I don't really like Thom for Mo. They do have a connection in the books.

[Cerendrallion 32]

Wow, I read this on ff.net without even knowing it was you!

 

Excellent job.

[jan 14]

Also, I don't really like Thom for Mo. They do have a connection in the books.

sigh... so they do! I think I could've lived with a romantic relationship between mo and lan more easily!

[Marie 73]

You're just in love with Lan, Payal.

 

And Thom/Moiraine RULE!!! Why?!

 

 

 

 

Because...that's the only hope I have for her to come back.

 

 

Oh yeah, and good job.

[Whitty 29]

Oooh. That was quite different. It's like...Moiraine was slowly loosing her mind, going mad, but in a different way. I donno. It's hard to explain. But I liked it.

 

Thom and Moiraine....~shivers~ I guess he could like, rescue her then, I don't know...die on the way back...

[Kaitlin 22]

Oooh. That was quite different. It's like...Moiraine was slowly loosing her mind, going mad, but in a different way. I donno. It's hard to explain. But I liked it.

lol, Whit. It's sneakily metaphysical.

 

Thom and Moiraine....~shivers~ I guess he could like, rescue her then, I don't know...die on the way back...

Why can't they just have old guy and hottie lovin'?

[Eldaya 0]

Why can't they just have old guy and hottie lovin'?

 

Um...because it`s disgusting,for example.

[Kaitlin 22]

Disgusting? How can age spots and neck waddle be anything but extremely sexy?

[Marie 73]

But Thom doesn't have those.

[jan 14]

Thom and Moiraine....~shivers~ I guess he could like, rescue her then, I don't know...die on the way back...

Now you're talkin'!

 

How can age spots and neck waddle be anything but extremely sexy?

Yeah... a dozen chins, fifteen tyres around the middle, creaking joints, smelly dentures...

 

...ooh, I should totally write erotica!!

[Kaitlin 22]

But Thom doesn't have those.

 

That's true. He's pretty darn fit for seventy (or twenty for that matter) if he can do flips and whatnot. Well, he'd still be able to if it weren't for his knee.

 

Yeah... a dozen chins' date=' fifteen tyres around the middle, creaking joints, smelly dentures...

 

...ooh, I should totally write erotica!![/quote']

 

lol.. write it about Cadsuane and that old guy who follows Mat around. That would be so sensual and dreamy.