Olivia's first Moiraine/Siuan slash

[Olivia 26]

I didn't really know where I was going with this when I started, and it's a pretty tame romance story, and more about love than sex. It's a part One, and rather short, so there will be more to follow (at this stage Moiraine is trying to deny her feelings) so it gets a lot more heated later on in the story. It will if my courage doesnt fail me, that is...

Also, it's really the first time I've posted anything I've written or let anyone else see it. So I would really like constructive criticism/comments, but please be gentle: it's my first time.

 

********** Part I **********

 

[Sivart Reborn 7]

One word.

 

Continue.

[Kaitlin 22]

A new take on Siuan and Mo, but following along with their characters. Yes, please do continue.

[Ekho 52]

I like, more please

[jan 14]

Nice. I liked the first-person touch. :-)

[Cerendrallion 32]

Oh, do continue, Olivia or I may become horribly obsessed.

 

I liked the description. Its very lyrical.

[Olivia 26]

Thank you all!

 

Part Two will be longer (and better) but it will take me a while to write, cause I don't have much opportunity to, unfortunately.

[Mea 0]

Wow! I wish you wrote the Books Olivia.

[Whitty 29]

soooo...whatever happened to part two, eh?

[Olivia 26]

I haven't forgotten.

[Whitty 29]

then let's go, woman! *pokes* it's been over 6 months!!

[AshSnow 0]

Beautiful. And well detailed.

 

I like how you describe the mood, especially the part of time finding "somewhere else to occupy herself".

 

I do hope you finish #2.

[Marie 73]

Wow, it's been a year. Time sure does fly.

 

My lack of catmwlt updates compels me to encourage Olivia to take her time.

[Olivia 26]

LOL Almost two years since I wrote that, wow O_O. Well I will probably upload the second (and final) part this summer. Probably. Maybe.

[AshSnow 0]

Final? =